Just received a new review of One, and thought I would share it here. Needless to say, I am really happy with the praise for the book:
I just finished reading your book. In all honesty when Pam put it on my kindle, I thought I was going to be tortured.
These are the points that I see
Your vocabulary and use of it is absolutely wonderful
The plot in the story though and I say this because I am a Jim Buther and Robert Jordon fan… was damn good.
When I came home after reading the book ,,,I told pam I didn’t know who was better, you of Jim Butcher
What I enjoyed most, was the subtlies of your character development. I had a hard time making it through the prologue but by pp 10, I was hooked.
I would really really like to see you continue writing.
I would highly suggest you send 1 or 2 of your middle chapters to different publishers.
I liked your story, the plot and all of the subplots
you wove everything together very skillfully.
Keep up the good work
Your new fan,